Opening Pages Critique

Whether you’re getting ready to query literary agents, or thinking of self-publishing, you’ll want to know:

  • Do your opening pages hook the reader?
  • Is the voice strong?
  • Is each opening scene coherent and page turning? 
  • Can the reader connect with the main character? 
  • Is the scene consistent? 
  • Are there any signs of potentially bigger developmental concerns? 
  • Are there any trending concerns surrounding formatting and line writing? 
 
This service is great for those querying without success. If you’re wondering whether it’s a matter of timing/not finding the right agent, or if something isn’t working with your writing, then I’m here to help!

Prices

First 10 pages*: AUD$30 (Approx. USD$20)

First 30 pages*: AUD$90 (Approx. USD$60)

Additional pages: AUD$3.00 per page – up to 5 additional pages can be added to include complete chapters.

First 10,000 words: AUD$120 (Approx. USD$80) for detailed critique. Additional $12 per 1000 words – up to an additional 2,000 words to include a complete chapter. 

First 10,000 words – MACRO ONLY FEEDBACK: AUD$60 (Approx. USD$40). 

First 15,000 words – MACRO ONLY FEEDBACK: AUD$90 (Approx. USD$60). 

Turnaround time: 2-5 days. 

*Pages are to be double spaced, first line indent, size 12 font, preferably Times New Roman.

My role is to assess whether your opening pages are working. You’ll find out what’s missing and how to fix it. 

If you’re not sure if your work is ready for a detailed critique, please consider macro feedback on your first 10-15k. This is also a great first step before a full Macro Developmental Edit to ensure I’m the right editor for your project. I am also happy to provide a sample edit for your first chapter.

Genre exclusions: I’m not the best editor for heavy science fiction, heavy historical fiction, or heavy religious content. Blends/light inclusions of these are fine. For literary fiction, I take on limited projects. Please email me for more info.

Kind Words

“Kathryn gave fantastic feedback on my submission materials! Her comments were thoughtful, offering improvements while highlighting what worked well. She is a wonderful asset to the writing community!”

~ Lyndsey – YA/MG Writer

What's Next?

Ready for professional feedback? Let’s get started!

Email: [email protected]

Subject: Opening pages critique

Body: Genre, number of pages, project goal (querying/self-publishing) + anything else you’d like me to know

More Kind Words

“Having someone else’s focus on your manuscript is a scary thing, but if you’re brave enough, and when you’re finally ready to make improvements, Kathryn will help. And you’ll be glad she did.”

~ JL – Author of ‘For What It’s Worth’ and ‘The Voices’

Want to be closer to living your publishing dream? Yes, please!

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