Opening Pages Critique
Whether you’re getting ready to query literary agents, or thinking of self-publishing, you’ll want to know:
- Do your opening pages hook the reader?
- Is the voice strong?
- Is each opening scene coherent and page turning?
- Can the reader connect with the main character?
- Is the scene consistent?
- Are there any signs of potentially bigger developmental concerns?
- Are there any trending concerns surrounding formatting and line writing?
My role is to asses whether your opening pages are working. You’ll find out what’s missing and how to fix it.
I also recommend starting with this service before a full Macro Developmental Edit to ensure I’m the right editor for your project.
First pages critique is also a great starting point when working on revisions, or even after your first draft when you have no idea what to work on next.
Genre exclusions: I’m not the best editor for heavy science fiction, literary fiction, heavy historical fiction, or heavy religious content.
Prices
First 10 pages*: AUD$25 (Approx. USD$17)
First 30 pages*: AUD$75 (Approx. USD$50)
Turnaround time: 2-5 days.
*Pages are to be double spaced, first line indent, size 12 font, preferably Times New Roman.
Kind Words
“Kathryn gave fantastic feedback on my submission materials! Her comments were thoughtful, offering improvements while highlighting what worked well. She is a wonderful asset to the writing community!”
~ Lyndsey – YA/MG Writer
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Subject: Opening pages critique
Body: Genre, number of pages, project goal (querying/self-publishing) + anything else you’d like me to know
More Kind Words
“Having someone else’s focus on your manuscript is a scary thing, but if you’re brave enough, and when you’re finally ready to make improvements, Kathryn will help. And you’ll be glad she did.”
~ JL – Author of ‘For What It’s Worth’ and ‘The Voices’
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